I really enjoyed all three of his essays. I particularly like his Diarrhea of the Mouth piece, as I struggled with the whole structure imposed on me by the imitation assignment (no offense Dr. A).
David has that same dissenting tone that I have come to love so much in writing. His memoir took something as simple as learning cursive and made a wonderful snapshot of the elementary-school kid condition.
I can see a great improvement in his writing structure throughout the course of the semester. His memoir was very well organized, and I felt like the organization of the paper helped reflect the mood of being a child.
David has shown me that he can write creatively no matter what the parameters of the assignment. I see him the kind of guy who treads softly, but carries a big stick as I have read his little bits of "social commentary" as I like to call it. I find this interesting that others can share similar ideas, yet not feel the need to complain about them (or maybe just hear myself talk) as much as I do.
I hope that you continue writing no matter where life takes you, good luck with the post-college life!
Posted by prat9517 on December 11, 2008
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